Monday, March 13, 2017

Springboard to the Stars

 

springboard me among the stars
spiraling around in heavenly flight
sending earth, my fondest regards
passing through worlds of light
sprinkling stardust, healing scars
earthlings slumber, dreams of night
quietly slipping past portal guards
winged dragon, mysterious knight
slaying hearts in a cosmic courtyard

posted for dVerse
writing a quadrille 44 words
including the word spring

37 comments:

  1. I liked the dragon and knight busy while the earthlings sleep.

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  2. I love your opening "springboard me among the stars"...and you take us on an exciting journey.

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    1. Thank you for visiting, I am glad you enjoyed the brief journey.

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  3. Beautiful. I love the stardust healing scars. And have a huge soft spot for dragons. Always.

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    1. I too have a soft spot for dragons and always will.

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  4. What a wonder-full little piece. "sending earth, my fondest regards" - brought a smile ... definitely the way to springboard to the stars.

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    1. Thanks Wendy, earth will always be dear..

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  5. I love that dragon and the stars. Magic

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  6. passing through worlds of light
    sprinkling stardust, healing scars
    earthlings slumber, dreams of night

    Would have been a thrilling cosmic journey through the Universe, True!

    Hank

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    1. Hi Hank,

      If only, it was possible.

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  7. That's a great opening line: 'springboard me among the stars' and I so enjoy anything with dragons!

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    1. Dragons hold a special place for those who believe...

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  8. That is one of your most beautiful pieces ever. All of the universe is their courtyard.

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    1. Alex, thank you so much! I am most honored you enjoyed my poem.

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  9. I feel transposed in a fantasy land, perhaps Middle Earth and beyond...

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    1. to Middle Earth and beyond, there are no limits..

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  10. passing through worlds of light
    sprinkling stardust, healing scars
    earthlings slumber, dreams of night
    quietly slipping past portal guards

    Beautifully calming!! I love this so much!❤️

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    1. Thank you Sanaa..may you leave with peace..

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  11. Magical words depicting a nighttime fantasy. One I will want to return to time after time. Bravo!

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    1. Thank you, please do visit again..

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  12. A place where much comes true as on a cosmic level things shine true. Could be quite the story too.

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    1. A story you say, perhaps one day...

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  13. "sprinkling stardust, healing scars"

    Luv that image, thanks for dropping in to read mine

    much love...

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    1. You are most welcome, I enjoy your blog.

      much love to you as well...

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  14. You must be a cosmic lifeform, one that can survive in space, see and identify objects in the red uv radiation spectrum and no oxygen! Now thats impressive.

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    1. Well, that made me smile a unique specimen of some kind :)

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  15. Wonderful opening line that worked as a springboard into the rest of a delightful poem.

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    1. a springboard to another realm, through the eyes of a poet..

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  16. This has such a dream-like quality to it. I love that. I've never dreamt I was flying, which I hear is weird, but I can picture it perfectly in this poem.

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  17. A cosmic courtyard... Very nice.

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  18. Lovely imaginative response Truedessa ~ The first line is my favorite ~

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  19. This is one of my favs! Purely magical!! Big Hugs!

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