Monday, February 12, 2018

Murmuring Skies




sunrise - wikimedia















In an early morning dew
tired,  she awoke feeling blue
in silence, she murmured, "why"
in an airbrushed sky, a gentle reply
take in the view, open your eyes
over the horizon, your dragon flies
in brilliant hues, her heart sighed
"thank-you",  she replied

Quadrille #50 for dVerse
We are writing a 44 word poem
incorporating the word murmur
 

13 comments:

  1. Brilliant indeed!
    Your dragon flies for you.

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  2. Love all that rhyme, and that dragon sky.

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  3. So lovely, the image of a dragon fly......smiles.

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  4. Flying and lighting the way to a brighter day.

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  5. The sky and the dragonfly as like entities..nice.

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  6. Love this... especially the dragon.

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  7. I like the recommendation in "take in the view, open your eyes" as a response to feeling blue.

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  8. Evocative as always. I especially liked: over the horizon, your dragon flies in brilliant hues, her heart sighed
    "thank-you", she replied
    Question: Did the open strip to view the 'glass' in the boat run the length of the bottom or was it only halfway where you had to get up to see it if you weren't sitting in the right spot?

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  9. Dragon fly is such good medicine. Lovely stuff.

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  10. Looking at the sky’s magnificence can often calm the questioning mind.

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  11. Stunning photo. I love those colors. “Airbrushed sky” indeed.

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  12. Truly beautiful! Love this! Big Hugs!

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